Final:
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This final piece has had Ash enlarged and moved slightly so that he is taking up more space at the top, which follows the conventions set by Billboard magazine. I have also made the text fit to Ash again after I moved him.
Draft 3:
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"Ash Waithe" has been moved so it fits perfectly and the picture has been made clearer. The paragraph have been replaced with proper information. There are also page numbers at the bottom of both sides which as well as the back ground they link to the contents page. I think that some of the items need to be moved around so that there is less unused and empty space.
Draft 2:
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This draft has improved upon all the points from the last draft. All the space has been filled and a picture is included to show the reader who it is I am interviewing. The paragraphs used in this draft are fake and don't make any sense and so will need to be replaced by proper information. "Ash Waithe" also needs to be moved slightly so it fits perfectly. My model is also too dark and so I will need to make him brighter and clearer. The layout is a convention set by Billboard magazine.
Draft 1:
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This draft is very bland due to the colour of the background and no text or pictures, so these will need to be changed so that they compliment each other. There is currently nothing on this page and so I will need to add all the componenets and follow conventions from professional products in my genre, pop.
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